overall very good, i thought the back ground music was very effective and the interviews were also very intresting yet afformative.however i did feel that the sound in places was a little distort as the background sound was a little to high, but thats it really.
Gervaise - Your Documentary is really good and enagaging to watch. There is a good use of conventions like music, good sense of humour from the presenter, good interviews and a wonderful mixture of facts and figures.
I don't think there is any thing bad about your documentary but the length of it is too long.
The documentary is really good and i found it quite interesting. i really liked the intro and found the presenting to be quite humorous as well which drew me in. I also thought the who wants to be a millionaire segment was really well worked and incredibly creative and original. The interviews aswell i found really interesting.
However i feel that you could have made this shorter as i felt it dragged on slightly. And the sound during the vox pops was muffled because of the background noise and i think a better location should have been chosen. Overall, good job!
Overall i think it was good because you had good range of shots and lots of good interviews. I like the way you edited and used fireworks to get the realism of who wants to be a millionaire. your voiceover was appropriate and appealed to the audience. however your interviews dragged on for too long as shown on the length of your documentary and the second interview could of been shot with more talking space.
+you have a good intro. the blur effect of the illegal downloader is very good and effective.good range of sources for interviews. the game quiz is also very good and a effective way of giving facts to your audience
-i don't think that you should have had miss talking as a voice over- your voice would have been better on its own as it is more enaging. the voice over background is very loud.
the topic on music downloading appeals to the majority of the audience as most people do illegal downloading so i think thats good. i also think that it is unqiue and that there is a place in the market for it as i have never come across a documentary on this topic before.
overall very good, i thought the back ground music was very effective and the interviews were also very intresting yet afformative.however i did feel that the sound in places was a little distort as the background sound was a little to high, but thats it really.
ReplyDeleteGervaise - Your Documentary is really good and enagaging to watch. There is a good use of conventions like music, good sense of humour from the presenter, good interviews and a wonderful mixture of facts and figures.
ReplyDeleteI don't think there is any thing bad about your documentary but the length of it is too long.
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ReplyDeleteThe documentary is really good and i found it quite interesting. i really liked the intro and found the presenting to be quite humorous as well which drew me in. I also thought the who wants to be a millionaire segment was really well worked and incredibly creative and original. The interviews aswell i found really interesting.
ReplyDeleteHowever i feel that you could have made this shorter as i felt it dragged on slightly. And the sound during the vox pops was muffled because of the background noise and i think a better location should have been chosen.
Overall, good job!
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ReplyDeleteOverall i think it was good because you had good range of shots and lots of good interviews. I like the way you edited and used fireworks to get the realism of who wants to be a millionaire. your voiceover was appropriate and appealed to the audience. however your interviews dragged on for too long as shown on the length of your documentary and the second interview could of been shot with more talking space.
+you have a good intro. the blur effect of the illegal downloader is very good and effective.good range of sources for interviews. the game quiz is also very good and a effective way of giving facts to your audience
ReplyDelete-i don't think that you should have had miss talking as a voice over- your voice would have been better on its own as it is more enaging. the voice over background is very loud.
the topic on music downloading appeals to the majority of the audience as most people do illegal downloading so i think thats good.
i also think that it is unqiue and that there is a place in the market for it as i have never come across a documentary on this topic before.