Out of the three ideas i feel that this is not your strongest idea as it is not very balanced, young people are already aware why this is bad.
This has potential to be a good idea. However i feel it needs to be more balanced in that it should show why people think that it's good. It does appeal to the target audience so it is effective in that area
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Out of the three ideas i feel that this is not your strongest idea as it is not very balanced, young people are already aware why this is bad.
ReplyDeleteThis has potential to be a good idea. However i feel it needs to be more balanced in that it should show why people think that it's good. It does appeal to the target audience so it is effective in that area
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