-You must reference your specific film! The points you make in the positive/negative columns could be applied to any film. You must insure that you make reference to your film on music downloading in every box!
-Your definitions, especially accountability, privacy & children, lack detail. You must fully explain your ideas to access a high grade.
Gervaise,
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-You must reference your specific film! The points you make in the positive/negative columns could be applied to any film. You must insure that you make reference to your film on music downloading in every box!
-Your definitions, especially accountability, privacy & children, lack detail. You must fully explain your ideas to access a high grade.